英語的一封信四年級60字左右—一封英文信四年級

上海中考英語145（助力高中）免費助力上海學生中考英語達成145分以上，重點突破與達成以下目標：

1.聽說測試達到滿分（復述與表達），

2. 寫作達到A檔18分以上

3. 聽力語法詞匯閱讀達到扣分2分以內

4. 為高中四大題型打基礎（翻譯與概要寫作、語法填空，詞匯填空和完形填空）

提示：

（1）上海中考聽說測試2023年開始將從目前的10分增加到15-20分，用來篩選學生的意圖更明顯。

（2）上海初中英語從2023年開始將改版，目前用了將近20年的牛津教材將成為歷史，而高中教材已于2020年率先改版，對學生的能力要求更上一個臺階。

今天開始發幾位基礎薄弱初三學生的作文修改（坐標：楊浦區內最底層的學校之一，定位：100-110）

只有同輩作文，才能深有感觸；只有對比原文和我的修改稿，才能懂得寫作之道。請珍惜最最最干貨！

A letter to my retired teacher (告知學校發生的變化）

修改前

Dear Mr Wang :

Hello! Mr Wang. You have been retired for one year. First, I am thankful to everything that you did for our school. Without your hardworking, the school can’t be as wonderful as nowadays. And then I’d like to tell some changes of our school. The school buildings have been rebuilt. It has a garden on the fourth floor now. It’s enjoyable to have a walk in the garden after class. And we have a new canteen which is air-conditioned. The most important is our classrooms are more wider and brighter. It’s comfortable to stay in the classroom and have a lesson. Our school is better and better. You must be very proud of it!

Yours Kevin

修改后

Dear Mr Wang :

Although you have been retired for one year, I am still thankful to everything that you did for our school. Without your hard work, the school couldn’t be as wonderful as it is now. There have been many changes in our school. The school buildings have been rebuilt. It has a garden on the fourth floor now. It’s enjoyable to have a walk in the garden after class. Besides, we have a new canteen which is air-conditioned. Most importantly, our classrooms are wider and brighter and it is comfortable for us to study in it.

Our school is getting better and better. You must be very proud of it! We are all look forward to seeing you again in the beautiful campus soon!

Yours Kevin