my family小學三年級英語作文;三年級英文作文my family

書寫不夠悅目，有涂劃，影響美觀。單詞間隔不勻稱，要控制一下。標題兩詞均需大寫，宜居中。

My family is very good. 句子沒啥毛病，表達自己的意思，值得鼓勵。

My mother and father and my brothe is in the family. 單詞brothe拼寫有誤。本句學生想要表達的可能是：但這不太符合我們在這個情景里的說話習慣?？梢赃@樣說：There are four people in my family. They are my mother and father, my brother and I.

There be句型在英語中是很常用的，學生在這里還不太會用。當學生善用there be句型時，他/她的頭腦里就開始萌發英語思維了。要讓學生多做這方面的造句練習。

Coco is in my family, too. 借用課本上的句子，沒毛病。

I love Coco, it is cute. 可改為兩句：I love Coco. It is very cute.

Coco the color is black. 要表達Coco的顏色是黑色的，可以直接說Coco is black. 或者Coco's color is black.

My mother and father love me, too. I love my family. 從涂改的痕跡看出，她本來把后一句寫在前面的，所以帶了個too。后來做了改動，too也該換換位置。

總體上看，這個學生是不錯的。她努力用自己所掌握的語言技能去表達自己的想法，雖然有些錯誤，但基本上把意思說出來了。 她的作文可修正如下：

My family is very good. There are four people in my family. They are my father and mother, my brother and I. Coco is in my family, too. I love coco. It is very cute. Coco is black. My mother and father love me. I love my family, too.